Concentration Re-works

The first two pieces have been re-worked and the third piece is my third and most likely final drawing in my concentration.  I tinted the clouds red in the first work but kept the silo black and white.  For my second photo, I changed it two black and white and then tinted the water red similar to the sky in the first one.  I drew the third one and put a cut out filter over it.

Concentration Check Point

Commentary
For my concentration, I decided to do Fear Of..  but incorporate a variety of medias and models.  I feel that my central idea; although unoriginal, is becoming a solid series of 12 photos.  I currently have 6 works of art: 4 photos and 2 drawings in my series.  I am currently working on my third and final drawing for the concentration and still questioning on how to properly incorporate them.  The drawings consist of pens, pencils, and markers while the photos are fairly pure other than simple lighting and contrast adjustments.  I have Fear Of.. loneliness, needles, height, dark, men, and sleeping.  I have a few of my others picked out but still deciding on which fears to use.  I believe that most people will be able to relate to one or more of these fears and if not can relate their own fears to one of the 12.

Weekly Challenge: Opposites

This is at an abandoned barn on Huron between 144th and 136th.  It is suppose to be about fashion and the rustic feel of the color white.  I changed the contrast and specifically made the sky more blue to help with the color scheme.

Silk Painting

On an AP scale I would give myself a 3.

3.A There is some successful use of the elements of design, but the investigation of their 

application to 2-D design principles is emerging and narrow in scope. 

3.F The work is uneven, but overall it demonstrates emerging technical competence and use of 

materials and media. 

3.D The work may show attempts at experimentation and/or risk-taking, but with limited 

success.